Review the given four short paragraphs. While reviewing the paragraphs, look for

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Review the given four short paragraphs. While reviewing the paragraphs, look for the logical fallacies in the paragraphs. Based on the logical fallacies you identified, rewrite the paragraphs such that they are free of the logical fallacies. Smartphone use is not making us smarter. For example, Alan could not pay attention to his family conversation at dinner last night because he was looking at his phone. That type of behavior is rude, and anyone who is rude cannot be smart. Humans were never meant to develop modern technology. That is why it is causing so many problems with our society. For example, fast food has caused an obesity epidemic. If we went back to how people used to live, we would be healthier and happier. Societies often have conflict between freedom and equality. These problems are caused by the fact that one can have either freedom or equality. Having both at once is not an option, so societies will always be in conflict. Evolutionary biology holds that people came from monkeys. I have never seen a monkey-human hybrid. Such a creature would be absurd. Because I have never seen one, they do not exist. Furthermore, because they do not exist, the claims of evolutionary biology are false.

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Smartphones provide information the way we require. Different apps are being available in our hands as Smarphones to capitalize on shared knowledge to make us smarter. These also improves our memory where we can use for someother purpose. Smartphones might be playing a role in increasing the overall IQ of our society. The increase stems from the improvement in our nonverbal reasoning skills, which can be attributed to the way our brains process information from our smartphones and other technology. Smartphones aren't making us stupid. They help us when we need it like when we get lost r reading books everything in the world is increasing in technology anyway. Users of smartphones are not intelligent, they learn to use it; and they live in a virtual world especially those connected all the time in social networks, The brains of the majority of users of smartphones learned over time to receive information without working neurons, which makes the brain lazy, and it's a great catastrophe. Here what shows Alan's behaviour being rude not paying attention is related to the specific individual who is involved with his smartphone. The same need not be by everyone or all who are engaged with smartphones.

Humans were never meant to develop modern technology.Technology infact is the development of humans. Humans with their brains, thinking capacity they started the use of technology. The meaning of technology is the collection of machines, tools to facilitate a specific purpose. In the prehistoric age early humans started the use of stone and bone tools to perform several tasks.  Modern technology is the various nuclear explosions, increase in pollution and global warming, productions of more and more weapons of mass destruction have led several people to doubt and question the necessity of advanced technology in our lives. People compared to present world have not much improved with technology, so they depended on the food prepared at home, doing hardwork,for example, the Mixers and wetgrinders which are used in olden days are not seen now. Now, humans without hardwork were able to manage their work easily. This is only with the improvement of technology. Obesity shown here of fastfoods because of the women going to work along with men shows the less time available for them to prepare food at home thereby depending on the fast foods. Though humans were not healthier as in olden days, but, are happier with modern technology.

Freedom is a state of being, a right granted by society to act according to one's desire within the rules set forth by that society. Freedoms can vary by degree from society to society.Equality  is the state of being equal, of having the same rights as another, if all adhere to the same rules. In an equal society, freedoms would be available to all in society and not vary by degree. Freedom gives an individual the right to form opinions about whomever they wish.But freedom and equality coexist nicely at times as well.the amount of freedom and equality you receive all depends on money and power. Wealth corrupts the balance of freedom and equality between the social classes in the nation.

Evolutionary biology holds that people came from monkeys. If this is what the Darwins theory is about, then why do we see the apes and monkeys today, Are the humans still coming out of such creatures. There is no evidence that it ever did. This theory was proposed long back, but not proved till today. Darwin during his end days, accepted the scriptures and repented for his wrong imaginary story created which will divert the entire world. As per history, he informed the same to the person who nursed him that he proposed a wrong theory. There are evidences in the Bible and Scriptures that Animals and Man are the creation of God.

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