Revise the following to eliminate long lead-ins.. A) This is an announcement to

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Question

Revise the following to eliminate long lead-ins..

A) This is an announcement to tell you that all computer passwords must be changed every six months for security purposes.

B) We are sending this memo to notify everyone that anyone who wants to apply for telecommuting may submit an application immediately.

C) I am writing this letter to inform you that your new account executive is Edward Ho.

D) this is to warn you that cyber criminals use sophisticated tools to decipher passwords rapidly.

E) This message is to let you know that social media services can position your company at the forefront of online marketing opportunities.

Revised form is the summarized form of sentence which highlights the main thing and ignores the irrelevant things.

Revised: Computer passwords must be changed in every six months.

Revised: Apply for telecommunicating now.

Revised: Your new account executive is E. H.

Revised: Cyber criminals use sophisticated tools to decipher passwords rapidly.

Revised: Social media services can position your company at the forefront of online marketing opportunities.

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