Question: Use the Paramedic Method in the sentences bellow, you will reduce your
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Question: Use the Paramedic Method in the sentences bellow, you will reduce your word count by eliminating unnecessary words. (The Paramedic Method helps you activate your sentences by eliminating passive voice and redundancies.)Bellow I have indicated word counts and target-range word counts after each sentence.
1.
The cartoon selected is an impactful statement on the general heart of the man that we call the president of the united states. (23 words; target: 10-13)
2.
The image that I will be utilizing demonstrates how there is a glitch between what Trump says and actually does. (20; target 11-12)
3.
During his campaign, he also talked about the border wall he wanted to build on the border of the United States & Mexico. (24; 11-14)
Explanation / Answer
1. This cartoon impactfully illustrates the heart of the United States' President.
2. This image demonstrates the glitch between what Trump says and actually does.
3. During his campaign, he proposed building a wall between the US and Mexico.
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