Change this persuasive letter in your own words. Dear Mr. and Mrs. Homeowner: Wo

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Change this persuasive letter in your own words.

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Homeowner:

Would you be interested in participating in a new cable TV show in which two areas of your home would be renovated?

How do you feel about your home? If you're not fully pleased with its appearance, this is an opportunity to take advantage of a team of expert designers and contractors who contribute up to $20,000 worth of improvements to make your home a showplace in your neighborhood. In addition, you will be featured on a national TV show.

We've heard that you are beautiful people but that, for whatever reason, maybe your home needs a little sprucing up, a little helping hand. We can do that for you!

To be eligible, you must own the house, have a front yard, and have two areas that need renovation. The new program, "Hideous Houses," has as its goal turning houses in need of help into attractive ones—and with little effort on the part of the owner.

If you are interested, call me at 310-457-7330 before June 30 so that I can personally present this offer and discuss the details of how you can improve the appearance of your house with little or no expense to you. Don't miss

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Dear Mr and Mrs homeowner.
We are producing a show in which we are renovating the houses on our expenses. Most of the expenses upto $20,000 would be directly levied by designers as well as contractors for our show. The show will be aired on the national television and in addition your home or would be renovated as a Masterpiece.We have been informed that your house needs a little bit of improvement. This show is perfect opportunity for you to obtain renovation of your house at no cost and being featured on a national television show.

For being eligible for this is specific show your house must have a front yard and have two areas for renovation and slowly owned by you. the show's is "Hideous Houses" and its main motive is to turn normal houses into attractive houses.

We are closing the entries on 30th of June. If you want to be a part of the show, you can contact me on 310- 457- 7330 for further confirmation. After the confirmation I will be personally visiting your house to tell you the details about how to change your house's appearance with very low cost or free of cost.
This is a very nice opportunity for you to be a part of a national programme as well as have your house renovated.

Regards

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