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You've probabley seen us working to get good speakers to speak at our "Lunch and Learn" sessions. Well, we've finally lined up speakers for September and October. It took a little twisting of arms, but we do have some really good speakers lined up. We're scheduling the talks from 12 to 1, but the speakers should plan to speak for only about 30 minutes and leave 10 to 20 minutes for questions and answer.

I need you to send message to these speakers to confirm.If any of them has questions or needs to change his date, just have them call my cell at 213.348.4421. We will need to get this done as soon as possible since the listing will be released in early September. The speakers inclue Alaina Adams, who agreed to speak at our first fall session on Tuesday, September 24. Her topic is "How to Talk So People Will Listen". Another interesting speaker is Caitlyn Cervantes. Her topic is "Ten Top Tips for Eating Healthy". Caitlyn's date is Tuesday, October 22. Another speaker who just agreed is Brandon Tabaldo, and his topic is "Staying Safe, Private, and Secure on Social Networks." We were able to schedule Mr. Tabaldo for Tusesday, October 15.

Oh yes, here are the e-mil addresses: alina.adams@circe.com, btabaldo@intercostal.com, and caitlyn.cervantes@rio.com. Thank you, Camille!

Kennedy Freed

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Hi all,

Sub:- speakers confirmation for september and october; Reg:-

Hi all, this is regarding confirmation of speakers for the next sessions which are going to be organized in the months of september and october. the speakers and topics are- Alaina adams- how to talk so people will listen and the program is scheduled on 24 september. the second one is Caitlyn and topic is ten top tips for eating healthy, scheduled on 22 october. and the thid one, speaker is Brandon, topic is staying safe, privae and secure on social networks, which scheduled on 15 october.

hence the early registrations are more preferable than late registrations. the people who are more interest can start the registrations early.

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