Anyone can help me for these question please with typing around 250 words, need

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Anyone can help me for these question please with typing around 250 words, need is asap!!!

Write a long sentence (40-50) words about a company or person you admire. Then revise the sentence so that it contains 10 words or fewer. Finally, rewrite the sentence so that it contains 16-22 words. Which sentence do you think is most effective? Why? Don't fall into the Goldilocks trap--the medium length sentence is not always the one that is just right. (Answer these questions about your own sentences, and then respond to your classmates posts. Also, try to make each sentence interesting...don't just add more words to make it longer. Really think about the art & craft of writing a sentence!).

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Someone I admire a lot is my cousin Era. She is 7 years elder then me. She is very beautiful having long brown hair, her features are so sharp, she is tall 5’9 inch. She is extrovert, friendly and confident. Her dancing skills are killing. She recently has signed a contract for modelling.

I admire my cousin Era and she possess beauty with brain.

Admiring my cousin Era. She is beautiful, tall and confident. She will soon be a model and her dancing skills is awesome.

If I read the three para’s above, I would go for third one for its precise details. The long para explains all about my cousin and my perceptions of her. Whereas the second para is single lined which is briefing what all I meant about her but doesn’t contain the information on facts. Whereas the last one carries the facts and my perception both in one line. Therefore, choose accordingly what you liked.

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