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Rewrite the following sentences in you-voice, we-voice, or I-voice to achieve a

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Question

Rewrite the following sentences in you-voice, we-voice, or I-voice to achieve a more effective tone

A. I’m happy to offer you a spot in the manager-in-training program

B. I’m Positive that this opportunity will help you career

C. You must turn in the application before July 1

D. I will lead the first orientation session for the program and then I’ll turn the reminder of the afternoon meetings over to my colleague

E. I’ve come up with some ideas for the training program, and I’d like to meet as soon as possible to get some discussion going. I want us to focus on a conversation about the salaries and benefits that would motivate more employees to apply for the program

Explanation / Answer

A. We are happy to offer you a spot in the manager-in-training program

B. We are positive that this opportunity will help your career

C. You must turn in your application before July 1

D. I will lead the first orientation session of the program and then I’ll turn the rest of the afternoon meetings over to our colleague.

E. We’ve come up with some ideas for the training program, and we should meet as soon as possible to get some discussion going. We should focus on a conversation about the salaries and benefits that would motivate more employees to apply for the program.

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