Please rewrite each of the following and use parallelism to accentuate the paral

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Please rewrite each of the following and use parallelism to accentuate the parallel ideas.

Example: We broke some windows, hopped a few trains. We had a few fights.

Revised: We broke some windows, hopped a few trains, and got into several fights.

Tom enjoys swimming, and he likes to skate too.

He wore a green suede jacket, and his shirt was flowered. He was wearing platform shoes, multicolored.

At 16, I was full of wildness, outspoken, and I was an uncaring person.

The work was difficult and there was danger in it.

Like many women, she had several roles: wife, mother, going to school, job.

When the teacher left the room, I talked loudly, was fighting with my classmates and would throw paper airplanes and even climbed on the desks.

When I disobeyed, my parents punished me: no going out, I couldn't talk on the telephone, and was not allowed to have company.

Slowly, with ease, and soundless, the dancers moved offstage.

The drums pounded, did throb, were rising and falling.

Good writing must be honest, have freshness, and precise words.

My son wants to be either a fireman or fly planes.

The students were more interested in dates with girls than in studying math.

Ans 1 - Tom likes swimming and skating.

Ans 2 - He wore a green suede jacket over his flowered shirt and multicolored platform shoes.

Ans 3 - At 16, I was full of wildness, outspoken, and an uncaring person.

Ans 4 - The work was difficult and dangerous.

Ans 5 - Like many women, she had several roles of wife, mother, going to school, and job.

Ans 6 - When the teacher left the room, I shouted, was fighting with my classmates, throwing paper airplanes and even climbed on the desks.

Ans 7 - When I disobeyed, my parents punished me by not allowing me to go out, talk on the telephone, and to have company.

Ans 8 - Slowly, easily, and without a sound, the dancers moved offstage.

Ans 9 - The drums pounded, and throb, were rising and falling.

Ans 10 - Good writing must be honest, fresh, and have precise words.

Ans 11 - My son wants to either be a fireman or fly planes.

Ans 12 - The students were more interested in dating girls than studying math.

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