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6.14. Editing for Clarity (Hedging) [LO-3] Rewrite these sentences so that they

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Question

6.14. Editing for Clarity (Hedging) [LO-3] Rewrite these sentences so that they no longer contain any hedging: a. It would appear that someone apparently entered b. It may be possible that sometime in the near future c. Your report seems to suggest that we might be losing d. Ibelieve Nancy apparently has somewhat greater influ- illegally. the situation is likely to improve. money. ence over employees in the e-marketing department. e. It seems as if this letter of resignation means you might be leaving us.

Explanation / Answer

The revised sentences will be as below:-

Someone has entered illegally

Things will get better soon

Your report shows we are losing money

Nancy has greater influence over employees in the e-marketing Department

It seems this letter of resignation means you will be leaving us

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