This is an english exercise, not psychology. Thanks BTW Style and Transition Exe

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This is an english exercise, not psychology. Thanks

BTW Style and Transition Exercises See Schedule for Due Date Instructions: For 1-10, correct the sentences. Then, write the revised sentence under the corresponding sentence CHANGE PASSIVE VOICE TO ACTIVE VOICE: 1. A dish called "Dragon, Tiger, and Phoenix" (snake, cat, and chicken) was once featured by restaurants in Guangdong Province, China 2. In the past year, over 900 people worldwide have been killed by SARS. ELIMINATE NOMINALIZATIONS (and PASSIVE VOICE if necessary): 3. SARS first made an appearance in Guangdong Province, China in November 2002. 4. The first identification of SARS was made by Dr. Carlo Urbani, a World Health Organization (WHO) epidemiologist who later died of the disease REVISE FOR POSITIVE EMPHASIS AND YOU-ATTITUDE 5. As a first year employee, you are not eligible for dental insurance 6. I will be out of the country October 25 to November 10 and will not be able to meet with you then 7. You will not get your first magazine for at least four weeks. 8. You will be happy to know that you can use your new cell phone anywhere in the United States and Canada REVISE THE FOLLOWING SENTENCES (MISCELLANEOUS PROBLEMS) Be able to state what is wrong in each sentence 9. Subsequent to the announcement he made, a news conference was held by him for approximately one hour of time 10. In these modern times of today, there are new approaches that college graduates should take to the job search. Fill in the blanks with the appropriate transitional expression For some people, high school and college are a waste of time student throughout high school hard for four vears. a friend of mine was an A be was accepted into college without any trouble. He studied be received a degree and entered the job market. he was unable to get a job in his field of study, even though he applied everywhere be was forced to apply for a job which required none of the skills he had obtained in school I have become convinced that high school and college are not always the best preparation for the real world

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1. Restaurants in Guangdong Province, China, once featured a dish called "Dragon, Tiger and Phoenix"( snake, cat and chicken )

2. In the past year, SARS have killed over 900 people world wide.

3. SARS first appeared in Guangdong province, China in november, 2002.

4. Dr.Carlo Urbani, a world health organisation (WHO) epidemiologist, who later died of disease, introduced the SARS.

9. Subsequent tto the announcement he made, a news conference was held by him for approximately one hour.

10. In this modern times, there are new approaches that college graduates should take to the job search.

Fill in the blanks

For some people, high school and college are a waste of time. In fact a friend of mine was an A student throughout high school. Occasionally he was accepted into college without any trouble. He studied hard for four years. And then he received a degree and entered the job market. However he was unable to get a job in his field of study, even though he applied everwhere.

Although he was forced to apply for a job which required none of the skills he obtained in school. As a result I have become convinced that high school and college are not always the best preparation for the real world.

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