Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation of the below parag

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Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation of the below paragraphs. English is my second language. Thank you very very much!

All of my results are so close to each other. However, by looking at the graph below, it shifted toward the relater category. I’m not necessarily slow at taking action, but I’m definitely very slow at making decisions. I never come to any conclusion unless I’m very certain about the solutions. Also, I always think about another people’s thought as well. I don’t want my decisions make anyone unhappy. I know it’s impossible that’s why it’s always hard for me to make a decision.

This result is very accurate base on one of my strength, relator. I don’t have a lot of friends, but if you’re my friends, I will do anything I could to support and help you. All I do is listens to others. In a group, I’m the one who is the most quiet. But I pay attention to every words that other people said and analyze the solution for myself.

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My entire results were very close to each other. However, on analysing the graph mentioned below, result shifted towards the relator category. I’m not necessarily slow at taking action, but I’m definitely very slow at making decisions. I never come to any conclusion unless I’m very certain about the solutions. Moreover, I always consider other people’s thoughts as well. I don’t want anyone to be unhappy. I know it’s impossible that’s why it’s always hard for me to make a decision.

This result is accurate based on one of my strengths, i.e. 'relator'. I don’t have a lot of friends, but if you’re my friend, I will do anything I could to support and help you. All I do is listen to others. In a group, I’m the one who is most quiet. But I am very attentive to what others have to say and analyze the solution for myself.

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