I WROTE THE LETTER SEE BELOW, JUST NEED HELP PROOFING IT, I CAN USE ALL THE HELP
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I WROTE THE LETTER SEE BELOW, JUST NEED HELP PROOFING IT, I CAN USE ALL THE HELP I CAN GET, THANKS FOR ANY HELP, ITS APPRECIATED!
Project 2: Introductory Letter
Read chapter 15 (Workplace Letters) to complete this assignment. In addition, you might review chapter 10 (Organizing for Readers) that discusses paragraph structure. [You will be assigned chapter 10 later this week]. In addition, I have included some information on the basic business letter from the North Carolina Writing Center website: http://writingcenter.unc.edu/handouts/business-letters/
Instructions: Write a one-page business letter introducing yourself to Mr.Tangeman (I am your recipient. Keep me in mind as you write: who am I, what do I care about, how much information do I need, and what is the nature of our relationship?). You may use block or modified block format. Use Times New Roman as your font. Do not use anything below a 10pt font size, and nothing larger than 12pt. This letter should be single-spaced and will include only one line of white space between “body paragraphs.”
Organize your response to these questions in any order you like, but be sure to answer the following questions in your letter:
Introduce relevant personal information.
Describe past experiences (i.e., writing experience) that prepare you for
this class--academic and professional examples would be appropriate.
Explain the role of this class in your career and educational plans, and how the skills practiced in this course may be useful to you.
Discuss what you expect from this class. For example, are there any skills, projects, or writing assignments that are of particular interest to you? How so?
A successful Introductory Letter will:
Conform to business letter format, including addresses for writer and reader, correct date format, correct line spacing, and correct margin justification.
Display professional tone and content.
Illustrate an awareness of target audience.
Organize its content logically.
Use specific and adequate detail
Demonstrate concision.
My address:
XXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXX, XX 77XXX
PLEASE START YOUR ASSIGNMENT ON THE NEXT PAGEà
XXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXX, XX 77XXX
June 9, 2018
XXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXX, XX 77XXX
Dear XXXXXX
My name is Christopher Stephens, and I am currently the Director of Operation for SparrowHawk an Industrial Real Estate strategy firm. I have been working in my current position for the past six (6) years. I oversee the day-to-day financial operations and functions of SparrowHawk, manage the company’s website and direct marketing and media relations. Other duties include supporting the company’s acquisition, disposition and property-management performance. I periodically conduct assessments of future needs and opportunities, as well as challenges facing the company.
My prior professional experience includes stents in the hospitality, office administration and real estate industries. You would be amazed at the at all the hoops that I have had to jump through to get to this point in my scholastic career. With full time year-round employment since the age of eighteen (18) I have managed to squeeze in hourly University classes for the past 19 years, from Texas A&M to University of Houston, I am 20 credits shy of Graduation. Its been a long road and what feeling of accomplishment. I made a promise to my late father and wife that I would complete this scholastic journey and I am so close.
Writing is a truly important/necessary communication skill, through my experiences it is one of the most important professional skills we can learn, teach and develop without this skill nothing great will be accomplished. The process of seeking employment, gaining work experience, and maintaining is a direct contribution to the growth one’s communication skills. Through the teachings from this class, I hope to elevate my technical writing ability and learn new skills that will further my professional career.
Through this class I hope to brush up on my general knowledge of letter writing, forming cohesive and correct sentence structures and punctuations. I am looking forward to the business plan assignment, I ran a small business for a few years due to my lack of proper planning i.e. a proper business plan, are customer acquisition cost was to great and we inevitably failed. I hope not to repeat moving forward, so I am truly looking forward to your instruction.
Sincerely,
XXXXX XXXXXX
Explanation / Answer
My address:
XXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXX, XX 77XXX
PLEASE START YOUR ASSIGNMENT ON THE NEXT PAGEà
XXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXX, XX 77XXX
June 9, 2018
XXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXXXXX
XXXXX, XX 77XXX
Dear XXXXXX
My name is Christopher Stephens, and I am currently the Director of Operation for SparrowHawk an Industrial Real Estate strategy firm. I have been working in my current position for the past six years. I oversee the day-to-day financial operations of SparrowHawk, manage the company’s website and direct marketing and media relations. Some of my other duties include supporting the company’s acquisition, disposition and property-management performance. I periodically conduct assessments of future needs and opportunities, as well as challenges facing the company.
My professional experience also includes stints in the hospitality, office administration and real estate industries.I have had to jump through a lot of hoops to get to this point in my scholastic career and therefore have a rich experience. With full-time year-round employment since the age of eighteen, I have managed to squeeze in hourly University classes for the past 19 years, from Texas A&M to University of Houston and I am just 20 credits shy of Graduation. It's been a long journey and I feel proud of my accomplishments. I made a promise to my late father and wife that I would complete this scholastic journey and I am very well on my path to fulfil that promise.
So, keeping in mind how important the skill of writing is and its importance in our daily life both professionally and personally, I would like to further hone my skill in this area further. Through my experiences, I believe that it is one of the most important professional skills we can learn, teach and develop and without this skill it is very difficult to make a dent in my professional career. The process of seeking employment, gaining work experience, and maintaining is a direct contribution to the growth one’s communication skills. Through the teachings from this class, I hope to elevate my technical writing ability and learn new skills that will further my professional career.
Through this class, I hope to brush up on my general knowledge of letter writing by forming cohesive and correct sentence structures and learning to use correct punctuations. I am also looking forward to the business plan assignment as I ran a small business for a few years, however, due to my lack of proper planning i.e. a proper business plan, our customer acquisition cost was too high and we inevitably failed. I hope not to repeat the same thing and endeavour to learn from my mistakes going forward.
I am truly looking forward to a positive instruction from your side.
Sincerely,
XXXXX XXXXXX
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