Revise the poorly written persuasive letter. Ms. Danielle Watkins The Beverly Hi

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Revise the poorly written persuasive letter.

Ms. Danielle Watkins The Beverly Hills Hotel 9641 Sunset Boulevard Beverly Hills, CA 90210 Dear Ms. Watkins: We know you are a very busy hospitality professional as chef at the Beverly Hills Hotel, but we would like you to make a presentation to the San Francisco chapter of the National Restaurant Association. I was asked to write you since I am program chair. I heard that you made a really good presentation at your local chapter in Los Angeles recently. I think you gave a talk called “Avoiding the Seven Cardinal Sins in Food Service” or something like that. Whatever it was, I'm sure we would like to hear the same or a similar presentation. All restaurant operators are interested in doing what we can to avoid potential problems involving discrimination, safety at work, how we hire people, etc. As you well know, operating a fast-paced restaurant is frustrating—even on a good day. We are all in a gigantic rush from opening the door early in the morning to shutting it again after the last customer has gone. It's a rat race and easy to fall into the trap with food service faults that push a big operation into trouble. Enclosed please find a list of questions that our members listed. We would like you to talk in the neighborhood of 45 minutes. Our June 10 meeting will be in the Oak Room of the Westin St. Francis Hotel in San Francisco and dinner begins at 7 p.m. How can we get you to come to San Francisco? We can only offer you an honorarium of $200, but we would pay for any travel expenses. You can expect a large crowd of restaurateurs who are known for hooting and hollering when they hear good stuff! As you can see, we are a rather informal group.Hope you can join us! Sincerely,

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Ms. Danielle Watkins

The Beverly Hills Hotel 9641

Sunset Boulevard Beverly Hills,

CA 90210

Dear Ms. Watkins,

We understand that being a chef at the Beverly Hills Hotel you must be having very much occupied with your responsibilities as a professional. Still, we would invite you to make a presentation to the San Francisco chapter of the National Restaurant Association. And, as the program chair of the Association, it’s my pleasure to invite you. I got to know that you made a really good presentation at your local chapter in Los Angeles recently on “Avoiding the Seven Cardinal Sins in Food Service”. And, we would love to hear the same or a similar presentation. All restaurant operators are interested in doing what we can to avoid potential problems involving discrimination, safety at work, how we hire people, etc. As you well know, operating a fast-paced restaurant is frustrating—even on a good day. We are all in a gigantic rush from opening the door early in the morning to shutting it again after the last customer has gone. It's a rat race and easy to fall into the trap with food service faults that push a big operation into trouble.

Enclosed please find a list of questions that our members listed. We invite you to talk in the neighborhood of 45 minutes or so on this topic. Our June 10 meeting will be in the Oak Room of the Westin St. Francis Hotel in San Francisco and dinner begins at 7 p.m. Please do let us know how can we help you to come to San Francisco? We can offer you an honorarium of a maximum of $200, but we would pay for any travel expenses. You can expect a large crowd of restaurateurs who are known for hooting and hollering when they hear the good stuff! As you can see, we are a rather informal group. Hope you can join us!

Sincerely,

Mr. X

Program Chair

National Restaurant Association

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