Review the two samples listed below. Comment on the DIFFERENCES between each sam
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Review the two samples listed below. Comment on the DIFFERENCES between each sample, which one you preferred, and how a Journalistic Profile DIFFERS from a traditional academic essay:
He knows when to hold 'em — and cashes in
Former college student Jared Hubbard is a rarity, a 23-year-old guy who makes an impressive living playing online poker.
Jared Hubbard’s job demands that he spend hours at a time intensely concentrating on four computer monitors simultaneously. Is he an air traffic controller? No. He wagers large sums of money daily. Wall Street broker? Guess again.
Hubbard, 23, of Winona, Minn., is a professional online poker player — one of the few people who actually make a living at it.
Poker’s popularity has skyrocketed in recent years, with the growth of online poker rooms and TV coverage of poker tournaments.
The consulting firm Christiansen Capital Advisors, which specializes in analysis of professional gambling, projects that Internet gambling revenue may total $18 billion in 2007.
While the National League of Poker estimates that thousands of people nationwide are profiting from online play, the average player is more likely to become a gambling addict than he is to suddenly roll in the dough. A spokesperson for Gamblers Anonymous said that 3 to 5 percent of gamblers are known to eventually become addicts, and the actual number may be three times as high.
Among the few online poker players who stay in the black comes an occasional wild success story like Hubbard’s. Ranked as the world’s No. 1 player in the six-man single table tournament (“sit-n-go”), he belongs to the top poker site Pokerstars.com’s Supernova Elite club, a ranking so difficult to achieve that it currently has only four members.
Hubbard’s success is no surprise to friend and fellow poker player Brandon Misfud, who has followed his pal’s career closely.
“He is one of the two best sit-n-go players, and without question the best six-man sit-and-go player in the world,” Misfud said, citing Hubbard’s top ranking on Sharkscope.com, a site that ranks online players based on total profit. “It takes dedication, commitment and a lot of practice to be as good as he is.”
Having the nerve to lose
The dark-haired Hubbard’s medium-size build and quiet, serious demeanor belie the sarcastic wit and determined mentality that those close to him are familiar with. He also possesses a deep knowledge of his career, gained through intense study.
Hubbard credits his success to the ability to apply what he has learned and to adjust to the sometimes unpredictable world of online poker: “No matter how much money you make, losing $8,000 in a day is going to suck. You just have to get used to it.”
While he doesn’t necessarily have any idols, the player he respects most is Phil Ivey, who has won five bracelets in the World Series of Poker events.
“He can play virtually any two cards profitably in many spots,” Hubbard said.
Hubbard began playing poker in high school. Like many players, he was intrigued by the poker movie “Rounders,” starring Matt Damon. When an injury took him out of sports, he began playing poker online.
A former business administration major at Winona State University, he began to play seriously when he found out that he was being laid off from his college job at Bay State Milling, where he worked loading flour trucks.
In the fall semester of 2006, Hubbard was making about $100 an hour playing poker. He decided to postpone his last semester to play full time — and hasn’t looked back since.
“I love the game, the money and the freedom,” he said. “I mean, find me another job where I can enjoy what I’m doing, make around $200 an hour, have the freedom of making my own schedule and take as much time off as I want, whenever I want.”
Winning over Mom and Dad
Hubbard’s parents were skeptical of his new career path at first. His father, Glen Hubbard, was unhappy with his son’s decision to forgo his last semester. But once Jared’s success proved more than a fluke, Glen accepted his decision.
“I don’t know how he can keep his head on straight, playing that amount of games at once,” Glen said. “The fact that he made more money than I did last year makes his decision a little easier. At first I thought it was just a fad that he and his friends were going through, but he is really dedicated with the time he puts into actually playing and studying the game.”
Hubbard’s mother, Paula Hubbard, was initially wary, as well, but he managed to convince her by presenting spreadsheets and statistics displaying his profits. “I still feel strongly that he should finish his last semester of college, as he should be able to juggle his poker as well as his studies,” she said.
Big ups, big downs
Hubbard’s normal workweek is usually 45 hours, often squeezed into four days. To maximize profit, Hubbard plays eight to 12 games simultaneously. Variance is an unavoidable reality of poker play. On a great day, Hubbard may make $11,000. On a bad one, he may lose $5,000 to $8,000.
“The losing days are smaller and less frequent than the winning days,” said Hubbard, who projects that he will make at least $250,000 this year. “I mean, even when I do have what I consider a bad week, I make at least $2,000.”
Hubbard also has experience in live poker. In October, he competed in the first U.S. Poker Bowl in Las Vegas, to be broadcast early this year on the Fox Sports channel.
During the game, another player accidentally took one of the cards dealt to Hubbard. The floor man declared Hubbard’s hand dead. “I thought it was an absolutely ridiculous ruling, since I was being penalized for someone else’s mistake,” said Hubbard, who had paid $8,000 to enter the event. “I made sure I let them know that.”
This summer, he also competed for the first time in the 2007 World Series of Poker, the largest buy-in event that he’d ever played — and he was out of the game in about half an hour. He was holding pocket aces, the best hand in Texas hold ’em poker, but lost to a much inferior hand.
“I loved it when we got all the chips in,” he said. “Then I’m out of the tournament one minute later. It can be a brutal game.”
While he enjoys poker as a hobby, he approaches it as a job.
“People think it’s just 'gambling.’” said Hubbard. “It’s probably at least 90 percent skill in the long run.”
Recently, Hubbard has debated going back to school to finish his last semester. But as a guy whose current goal is to purchase his first house with cash, he believes school can wait indefinitely.
“Basically, you go to school to get a good job and make good money,” said Hubbard. “I already have a good job.”
Candyce Cook is a journalism student at Monmouth University in West Long Branch, N.J.
Born to dance: Teenage ballerina living her dream Asbury Park Press (New Jersey) December 13, 2007 Thursday
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December 13, 2007 Thursday
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HEADLINE: Born to dance: Teenage ballerina living her dream
BYLINE: LAUREN GILDE
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The lights shine down and the music surrounds her as she spins across the stage into the arms of her partner. The audience roars its approval as the music slows and the curtains begin to close.
It's the end of just another workday for teenager Chelsea Rittenhouse.
At 18, the Howell resident is the youngest member of the New York Theater Ballet, which describes itself as the most widely seen chamber ballet company in the United States. The professional group also tours abroad.
"I cherish every moment on stage with the lights in your face, being surrounded by the music, performing for an audience and hearing their applause," Rittenhouse said. "It's something most people will never feel, but it's one of the best feelings anyone could ever imagine."
As exciting as it is, it can also be overwhelming.
"It is surprising that I was able to go straight into a company at 18 years old," she admitted. "But it is also more work and more pressure being young because everyone else has so much more experience."
Not that Rittenhouse doesn't already have plenty of experience.
At age 4, she began dancing at Denise Danielle School of Dance in Brick. Since then, she has attended the Academy of Dance Arts in Red Bank, The Central Pennsylvania Youth Ballet school and the Fine and Performing Arts Center at Howell High School.
She also has performed with the Company of Dance Arts, a preprofessional ballet company in Red Bank, starring as Clara in "The Nutcracker" and playing the lead in "Tangoed."
"Chelsea was an outstanding student," said Lisa Twamley, a dance teacher at Howell High School's Fine and Performing Arts Center, where Rittenhouse last year won the rising star award. "She demands a lot from herself. She will not accept anything that is not excellent. She is very easy to work with, and because she is, you want to work with her."
Rittenhouse's success hasn't been without sacrifices.
"Sometimes I miss being a regular teenager because, growing up, I missed school dances or I'd always be the last one to arrive at parties," she recalled. "But it was something I had to be dedicated to and it wasn't a chore to me. It just became a part of my life."
She added, "I always told myself that I wouldn't be one of those people who had a dream and never followed it."
Last spring, her 14-year commitment paid off. After reading on its Web site that the New York Theater Ballet was hosting an open audition in April, she tried out.
"I was hired on the spot the day of call-backs," she said.
Following her high school graduation in June, Rittenhouse took a two-week intensive training course at the Miami City Ballet.
"Every day we would take gyrotonics, which is similar to pilates, a two-hour technique class, an hour of pointe or partnering, and an hour-and-a-half of rehearsal for the end of (the course) performance," she said.
From there, it was off to New York to train and rehearse with her new employer six days a week. So far, Rittenhouse has performed in front of audiences at the ballet's studio in Manhattan and in Massachusetts at Jacob's Pillow, America's first and longest-running dance festival.
Her schedule is about to get a lot more hectic. This month, her troupe is performing "The Nutcracker" 25 times.
But Rittenhouse is ready. This is what she's trained for for most of her young life.
"My love for dance keeps me going, even after a hard day or a disappointing one," she said. "I just think about how much I love it, and it's my dream. And I have never been one to quit or, trust me, I would have quit already. Dance is very demanding, and you have to be a strong person to take the criticism and hard work."
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