English Speaker needed ! Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage. I am wr
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English Speaker needed ! Please correct my grammar and vocabulary usage. I am writing to add more details of work experience on my CV sent to a company. Thank you very much.
In addition to the previous CV, now I would like to add the work experience I have had. Please, if possible, pass this to the HR team. Every summer holiday when university broke up, I traveled back to Hong Kong and helped in family business which is a hotel named Grand Hotel and here is the website www.grand.hk . I worked from the most basic roles such as a cashier, a cook and a cleaner, to admistrative work such as accounting, bookkeeping and marketing. Last year I was assigned by my family to promote our hotel into Chinese market because I am the only one in the family who can speak Mandarin and I succeeded in doing so by presenting my hotel to the biggest online travel agency which is Ctrip.com. I did my own research about marketing in China from scratch, contacted the online travel agency company in China and found out that Ctrip.com is the biggest one. I then impressed that company with my Chinese language skills and finally got invited to their sales office in Bangkok to conduct a presentation in Chinese and English given to their administrators. We became the first partner hotel from this district in Hong Kong. Evidently here is the link of Ctrip.com and my hotel www. (LINK).com Now our hotel has welcome a number of Chinese tourists from that online travel agency.
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