English grammar check: I am writing a follow-up letter to the company manager, I

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English grammar check: I am writing a follow-up letter to the company manager, I would really appreciate you check my grammars and make the letter sound more professional, Thank you:

I would like to thank you once again for the time and consideration to review my application and I am waiting to hear back from you. As I mentioned during the interview that I do have some other offers stand by and I would really like to follow up with you before I make my final decision. I am more than confident that X company would be the perfect organization for me to start my career as an engineer. I highly believe I do have the qualification to be a part of your team. Also, my work experience and academic achievements will definitely compliment your company. This is a very important moment of my personal and professional life, therefore, I would like you to request you to consider me as a member of your organization.

Please check the attached PDF, which is my most recent transcript and this shows my hard work and dedication that I want to apply in your team

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I would like to thank you once again for the time and consideration to review my application and I am waiting to hear back from you. As I mentioned during the interview that I do have some other offers stand by and I would really like to follow up with you before I make my final decision.

I am more than confident that X Company would be the perfect organization for me to start my career as an engineer. I highly believe that I do have the qualification to be a part of your team. Also, my work experience and academic achievements will definitely compliment your company.

This is a very important moment of my personal and professional life; therefore, I would like to request you to consider me as a member of your organization.

Please check the attached PDF, which is my most recent transcript and this shows my hard work and dedication that I want to apply in your team.

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