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Editing Sentences to Improve Style.

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4) Following are the distinct reasons to retain your current policy with Interstate Insurance:

-Convienent claims with submissions

- An agent who is fully prepared to help you to the fullest.

- web page.

5) Planning meetings will be held during next month at different dates and times. These meetings will help us to plan for the upcoming conversion to a revised HR system. Meeting times to devise the plan will be as follows:

-May 3, 2-3 PM

-May 10, 2-3 PM

-May 17, 2-3 PM

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4) Reasons for retaining your policy with us:

5) Meetings regarding conversion to a revised HR system are scheduled as follows:

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