Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation, topic sentences.

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Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation, topic sentences. Thank you very very much!

"Thank you for your reflection. I also feel like the interpretation of the score is a little off. I agreed when you said “it’s only human nature for people to do as little work as they can get away”. At the same time, I also believe that there will be a lot of people take their work seriously, and very responsible about what they do. I know a lot of people who willing to work overtime without getting paid just to complete their work. I’m so lucky to work with those nice people, so I don’t have any reason to not trust them. I think the people who you have to deal with really affect the way you think about the human in general."

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Thank you for your reflection. I too feel that the interpretation of the score is not done correctly. Although I agree with your statement that it’s human nature for people to do as little work as they could in order to get away, I also believe that there are lots of people who take their work seriously and do things responsibly. I know that there are lots of people who are willing to work overtime without getting paid just to complete their work. I’m so lucky to work with those nice people, so I don’t have any reason not to trust them. I think, people who you work with affect the way you think about other people in general.

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