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A writing team regularly uses email to coordinate projects and to maintain a fri

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Question

A writing team regularly uses email to coordinate projects and to maintain a friendly, collaborative work environment.

Identify and slect ONLY ONE of the flaws listed below in the email message.

(Hint: There Are Two Possible Correct Selections: You ONLY Need to Select ONE of Them for Full Credit).

To: Documentation Department

Subject: Status of Trace Instrument's Consulting Project

It would be nice to know the status of the Trace project so I can plan my summer hours with some accuracy.

I understand that the uncertainty with the Trace Instrument's project is causing some scheduling nightmares. I want to briefly update you.

The project smaller than we first thought. Initially it seemed like a cast of thousands would be involved. However, the company will pay for only three of us. Steve, Ming, and Stacy will work on the project. While you may be disappointed, I'm sure some "cost overruns" by the team will teach Trace Instruments a lesson

I have your name and will contract you if the project grows.

Wilma Vogel

Question 5 options:

The writer failed to proofread the message before sending.

The writer flamed the writer of an earlier message.

The writer wasted bandwidth by quoting an earlier message.

The writer failed to understand the permanent nature of email messages.

1)

The writer failed to proofread the message before sending.

2)

The writer flamed the writer of an earlier message.

3)

The writer wasted bandwidth by quoting an earlier message.

4)

The writer failed to understand the permanent nature of email messages.

Explanation / Answer

Ans 3) The writer wasted bandwidth by quoting an earlier message.

The writer has committed some mistakes while writing the email , so it would have been good , if he had proof read his email before sending . And also he has wasted bandwidth be rewriting the sentence that mentioned the problem of writer of the earlier message . So that was not at all required.

A simple answer , giving the reason would have been enough .

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