When you reply to your peers, give them feedback on what is effective in their p

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When you reply to your peers, give them feedback on what is effective in their profile and why it is effective and also discuss what they could improve and how. Good feedback is constructive and specific.

What is expected here is to give a detail constructive feed back on the LinkedIn profile summery below.

I am an intern at Interiors by Melody. I assist with her website and putting her designs into computer programs. I assist with errands and go to meetings with her.

I was a previous intern at All Tile for the Architectural Specifications Representative. I assisted with library updates at architectural firms and meetings with designers.

I enjoy every aspect of being a design student and am eager to connect with other interior designers.

I am working towards relieving my Bachelor of Fine Arts in Interior Design with a minor in Fine Arts from Park University.

I am always interested in hearing from fellow interior designers, or other creative people, so feel free to contact me if you would like to connect.

Explanation / Answer

The student should first talk about the education and what he studying. The next point should be on the interests and passion. The third point should talk about the first work experience and should talk about the current job. The summary can end with a request to connect with the people from the same profession. So the correct order here would be 4, 3, 2, 1, 5.

Apart from this, the student can also talk about the future plans and what he wants to learn or what the professional aspirations are. This can attract the recruiters looking for the people with specific skill set or interests. The student can also talk about and mention the tools and technologies, he/she is familiar with. Adding keywords can help the student get better visibility on the platform.

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