Response Part I: One of your colleagues has drafted the e-mail below to be sent

Question

Response Part I: One of your colleagues has drafted the e-mail below to be sent to all your firm's clients. After you have reviewed Chapter 12, please revise the draft to improve it: Hey! Betcha' didn't think you'd be hearing from me so soon, but you can't get rid of me so fast (hahaha). We're going to be having a huge party here at the firm to celebrate the Fourth of July. Lots of food, games for the kiddies, and maybe some adult beverages (wink-wink) for us. Give me a shout back if you want to come. We'll kick things off at 11:00 a.m. on July 1st, so you'd better let me know by about June 25th if you'll be there. See ya! Bubba

Explanation / Answer

Hi Betcha,

Hope you are doing great. This mail is to invite you to a party which is being organised in our firm on 4th July. Please note that we have special arrangements being made for both children and Adults and I request you to kindly attend with your whole family.

Kindly reply with your confirmation on the same mail by June 25th as we have to start arrangements from 1st of July.

Hoping to hear a positive note from your end.

Cheers!

Bubba

His student, I tried to make it simple and professional to the best of my ability. Do leave a comment if you need any additional clarification

Related Questions

Navigate

• Browse (All)
• Browse R
• Subjects

---

---

Integrity-first tutoring: explanations and feedback only — we do not complete graded work. Learn more.