Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing cliches, slang, buzzwords, and

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Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing cliches, slang, buzzwords, and wordiness.

Our manager insists that we must think outside the box in promoting our new kitchen tool.

Although we got burned in the last contract, you can be sure we will stand our ground this time.

Beyond the shadow of a doubt, our lousy competitor will make another snarky claim that is below the belt.

If you refer back to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions for preventing blowing the budget.

BTW, have you heard the latest buzz about hackers ripping off customer info from Best Buy?

Our Manager insist that forthe promotion of our new kitchen tool, we must think out of the box.

AAlthough our last contract was not a success, we will stand our ground this time.

There is no doubtthat our lousy competitor will make another snarky claim that is beelow the belt.

If you refer back to our five-year plan, you will see that there are provisions to protect the budget.

By the way, have you heard the latest buzz that hackers are retrieving cusomers inforamation from best buy site.

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